Pitch check

Immediately, in the first line

Written for: Business buyers · Credibility: A mix of claims and evidence

Would an investor or a customer keep reading?

The state Jev read

Meridian is the operating system for modern logistics teams. We replace the spreadsheet sprawl that runs two trillion dollars of freight with a single collaborative workspace. Since launching in March, 40 mid-market shippers moved their weekly planning onto Meridian, cutting the planning cycle from 11 hours to 90 minutes.

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The headline reads

Value clarity

Score

Whether a stranger gets it in one read.

90%
high
3.88 of 4 · Immediately, in the first line

Written for

Choice

Who this text assumes is reading.

39%
low
Business buyers at 52%, from 5 options
52% Business buyers

Credibility

Score

Whether the claims are backed.

49%
low
2.11 of 4 · A mix of claims and evidence

Everything else in the same request

Differentiation

Score

Whether a competitor could copy-paste this.

87%
high
2.96 of 4 · A clear, specific difference

Uses real numbers

Noul

Traction, pricing, scale.

Almost certainly
Probability the answer is yes
99%
No Coin flip Yes

Names the problem

Noul

Whether the pain is stated before the cure.

Probably
Probability the answer is yes
87%
No Coin flip Yes

Jargon-heavy

Noul

Category language standing in for substance.

Probably not
Probability the answer is yes
25%
No Coin flip Yes

Has a clear ask

Noul

What the reader is supposed to do next.

Almost certainly not
Probability the answer is yes
8%
No Coin flip Yes

Would get a reply

Noul

The cold-email acid test.

Genuinely unsure
Close to a coin flip — do not branch on this alone
48%
No Coin flip Yes

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  "state": "Meridian is the operating system for modern logistics teams. We replace the spreadsheet sprawl that runs two trillion dollars of freight with a single collaborative workspace. Since launching in Marc…",
  "model": "jev-latest",
  "questions": {
    "value_clarity": {
      "type": "score",
      "instructions": "How quickly does a reader understand what this offers?",
      "criteria": [
        "Never — the value is never stated",
        "Only after several reads",
        "By the end of the paragraph",
        "By the second sentence",
        "Immediately, in the first line"
      ]
    },
    "audience": {
      "type": "choice",
      "instructions": "Who is this pitch written for?",
      "criteria": {
        "Investors": "Framed around market, traction, and returns",
        "Technical buyers": "Framed around how it works and integrates",
        "Business buyers": "Framed around outcomes, cost, and risk",
        "Consumers": "Framed around personal benefit",
        "Nobody in particular": "Too generic to identify a reader"
      }
    },
    "credibility": {
      "type": "score",
      "instructions": "How well are the claims in this pitch supported?",
      "criteria": [
        "Unsupported assertions throughout",
        "Mostly claims, one soft proof point",
        "A mix of claims and evidence",
        "Most claims carry specifics",
        "Every claim has a number or a name behind it"
      ]
    },
    "differentiation": {
      "type": "score",
      "instructions": "How clearly does this distinguish itself from alternatives?",
      "criteria": [
        "Any competitor could have written it",
        "A vague gesture at being different",
        "A stated difference, unproven",
        "A clear, specific difference",
        "A difference that is hard to copy and easy to verify"
      ]
    },
    "has_numbers": {
      "type": "noul",
      "instructions": "Does the pitch contain specific numbers?"
    },
    "names_the_problem": {
      "type": "noul",
      "instructions": "Does the pitch clearly state the problem it solves?"
    },
    "jargon_heavy": {
      "type": "noul",
      "instructions": "Is the pitch obscured by jargon?"
    },
    "has_ask": {
      "type": "noul",
      "instructions": "Does the pitch make a clear ask of the reader?"
    },
    "would_reply": {
      "type": "noul",
      "instructions": "If this arrived cold, would the intended reader reply?"
    }
  }
}

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